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Daniella hurried away from the group of Mark-adorers. Although she liked Mark, she had always despised the giggling possy of fans always around him. She wanted Mark to like her for her, not as just another adoring fan.
As she arrived at the bus stop, she realized that she was just a minute too late. She had her driver’s license but no car and so always took the bus. Mark and his friends all had their own cars. She looked back toward the school building, wondering if maybe someone would offer her a ride. No one was in sight. She would have to walk home. She started off, but suddenly saw Dustin. He had always picked on her and was probably mad that Mark had told him to stop, and so she automatically ducked behind a nearby car. He was walking right towards her though, and Danny looked around for somewhere to hide. She saw a door to the school music hall she had never noticed before. It was close enough that she could make it to the door and stay behind cars. She quickly began to run towards the door, stooped over so Dustin wouldn’t see her. Reaching it, she quickly opened and ducked inside, pulling the door shut behind her.
Instantly Danny knew something was wrong. She had no idea where she was.
She was standing in the middle of a large field. She could see a huge city in the distance, several in fact. She turned back to the door to let herself out, but the door was no longer there.
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